2 thoughts on “Can I have it?

  1. palmeracerbus

    I find your writing to be beautiful and thought provoking, however I think that if you brought in more sensory detail about the path (the one you’re on now and the one you should be on to get to your end goal) it would make a more lasting impression on your reader

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